Currently I stand
in the field of golden wheat, the stalks waving in the breeze. I walk in the
faded footsteps of men who made a Pledge to fight for what they believed in.
They had an Allegiance to their commanders and to their country. I look To the
sky, imagining the brilliant blue muffled with smoke from muskets and cannons.
I walk up The hill overlooking the town below. I can see a Flag ripple in the
wind, a reminder of what was fought for here.
On the edge of the field a single
stone marks the name Of this place. For the people who once stood here The
stone signifies a victory against all odds. I close my eyes and think about the
way those men stood United, facing eminent danger. They did not have unified training,
only a rag-tag group of men from various States. Men Of this area knew more
about farming than fighting in a war. The one thing they did have was a name to
fight for, America.
Eventually the smoke cleared And the
sounds of gunfire ceased. The trained soldiers retreated To their camp. At last, The men
who had fought for freedom stood tall and proud. They served their Republic with
every breath. They fought For the women and children of the towns. I now look
for the courage Which they showed without hesitation. I stand here, hoping to
soak It up by remembering how it was once displayed. My son Stands at my side, looking
out at fields stretching into the distance.
He is the One I have to be strong for. Soon I will be following the footsteps of those men long forgotten; fighting for the Nation they believed in. I tell myself that I will not fail Under pressure. I tell my son that God will bring me home safely. As I say goodbye the next morning I tell my loving wife that we are Indivisible, that the miles between us will not matter.
For the first time, With a heavy heart, I walk away from the two people who mean the most to me. Once the plane takes off, my thoughts are of fighting for Liberty. I think about the men who fought And died in that field. Like them, I also want Justice for my country and its citizens. When the time comes For me to face the enemy, I only pray that I have the courage to battle with every breath. I am standing strong for All the people who have come before me.
I just got it...
ReplyDeleteThe Pledge of Allegiance is capitalized in here. Like the whole thing. Those aren't random.
Mind=blown
I would make the ones that you put at the beginning of a sentence in the middle of one to make them stand out more.
Thank for the comment. The words being in the middle instead of the beginning is one thing I had mulled over before, I agree it works better in the middle.
ReplyDeleteThis is epic :) I didn't get it until the second read through. I really like the message of this piece as well as the way it was conveyed.
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